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The story of Journey.I think it's like this.
When you begin, you are left there by yourself, with no real goal, just a hint. You are alone, at least, until you meet.... Let's name him Bengt. (note his long scarf, I'll get to it later)

You go to the mountain, aided by a higher force. (I think that they are the ones who ruled your cities before they were destroyed) and, you, being weaker than Bengt, die.
The leaders knew that this would happen.
The mountain is were the leaders reside, only one at a time could see you, maybe because there wasn't enough...let's call it "magic".

When you die, you are brought back by the leaders. Now, your scarf is long, like Ben
NeverHe never smiles,
He never blinks,
He never eats,
He never drinks.

In the game,
He's bound to lose,
It's not his choice,
He cannot choose.

He cannot leave,
He cannot quit,
He can only wait,
Until he's hit.

He can only wait.
For when he falls to the floor,
His cries we'll hear,
Nevermore.

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Lazy art is lazy...
Just keepin' active, bros.
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Critique by *Taci-Mortis Dec 2, 2012, 11:23:57 AM
Well to begin i fine you choice in pop tarts rather dated as Mr mine has many problems with the colour of this piece of artist dinosaur pie.

The colour dates back to the medical date of 1856 when king Charles was enforcing sexual labor to Midgets to make them draw picture of talking pineapples.

the reds show the blood a butt hurt brony shed when some guy said MLP was for fags while the blue is the element of waffle irons.

but is fight tiger really a way how to make love to the middle east?

And that honk just shouts Martin Luther King's Speech of freedom
Imma give this a 9138 Out of Five stars.
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